Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 8 December 2016

RC Mayhem




My Reflection

I am  learning to wright a narrative. Some thing that I could improve on is using more detail. A goal that I am setting for myself is to use more detail in my story.

Friday, 18 November 2016

Camp MERC



I am learning to write a recount. I am proud of being able to write three pages.  It can be tricky to spell words correctly. The next step for me is to work on detail for the story. 

Friday, 9 September 2016

Camp MERC Reflection


Reflection

Something that I found challenging was the rock climbing because those things that you grab onto were too far apart for my liking. Something that I enjoyed was stack'em because I liked the fact that it was a challenge to keep your balance on top of the crates. Something that I didn't enjoy was the bus ride there and back because it was really noisy and everyone was shouting. My favorite memory of camp is the giant ladder because I found it a challenge to climb onto wood that was far  apart.

Tuesday, 17 May 2016

The Grand Gem Adventure



I am so proud of being able to write an adventure story.It can be tricky to think about ideas to make my story better.My Teacher can help me with my story.The next step for me in my learning might be to write another story with more detail in it.

Tuesday, 12 April 2016

The Science Roadshow



I am learning to write a recount.

I am proud of being able to write about the main ideas of my recount.
It can be tricky to write in specific details. The Teacher can help me to write a recount.
The next step for me in my learning is to write a longer recount.

Monday, 21 March 2016

Past Tense Activity


Reflection
I am learning to write in the past tense.
I am proud of being able to identify past tense words
I found it tricky to change the words with no rule
My parents can help me in my learning.
The next step for me in my learning is to write a year 6 recount using past tense.

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Year 6 Welcome Post



Welcome to Year 6. My name is Nathan. I am in Room 21. I am looking forward to helping the Juniors. I am already in the Enviro Team. I am enjoying being part of a boys class and being one of the leaders in the school.   

Monday, 9 November 2015

Joshua ant the three houses


I was learning to wright a narrative, I thought it was really because i used two
I chose to share my learning by creating …
I thought it was … because …
My next step is to ...

term 4 week 5 blog recount

Nerr nerrr that is is the sound of the trim pump not moving the stern leg. "Dad" I yell as he just walks up the jetty. "Yea" he yells back walking back down  the jetty. He is thinking at this stage this is bad.


"It's bad" I say the trim pump is not working  "o no" dad says he says so were siting there with the tools out and tisco man (dad) trying to fix the trim pump. So in the end dad went to get the truck and started to witch the boat up and the mum shouted "stop." "Why" dad asked,  and mums said you're winching the truck and trailer into the water. So in the end dad disconnecting the oil pipes from the trim pump. So the stern leg is flexible, then dad could final winch the boat up on the trailer. Wen we got up on  falter land we used a tie down to hold up the motor.   


"This was a huge hassle I really want not to happen again" I say to dad. "you're rite" he replies. Mum and Tevin agrees.      

Friday, 6 November 2015

Narrative Framework

My Reflection
I found this really easy because I know the story little red riding hood really well.
My next step is to wright my own Narrative Writing Planner.  

Monday, 2 November 2015

Building the wood shed

Last weekend dad and me went to bunnings warehouse to get some corrugated plastic for the wood shed we are going to build.

 My dad wanted  commercial corrugated plastic but they didn't have any, so we had to normal stuff. Once we got home we started to measure up the wood  wore the frame.

Unfortunately my dad thought the sheets of  corrugated plastic were 20.8 meters long butt they are 20.4 meters long 
so we had to make some last minute changes to the planks. 

Dad thew the first sheet of corrugated plastic on which went well then he told me to go get the no more gapes and full up the gaps on the side. Meanwhile dad was fixing the corrugated plastic to the frame with screws. After that the second sheet of  corrugated plastic went on and the process  repeated. Now the wood shed  is now completed my dad  decided to demolish the fence between the garden and the wood shed. With the left over planks I  decided to make a path though the garden to the wood shed. Dad said this is going tho be helpful when I go to get the wood  at night.          

Tuesday, 20 October 2015

blog recount

swimming!

"sharks it't you swimming time" shouts Mrs Melville,
"YES" I whisper I love swimming. When we get down to the pool everyone rushes to the changing rooms to get changed. Peter,Joshua and me don't have to get changed because we were wearing our togs underneath our school uniform. So I take off my shoes and socks,rip off my shorts and T-shirt,run out of the changing rooms. 

By the time I  get out of the changing rooms there are three girls out and no boys. When I jump in the pool is freezing! Once everyone is out from the changing rooms Mrs Melville asked us to make a whirl pool, that didn't go well, fore me at lest. The whirl pool starter of big and then turned in to a rectangle.
          
 After that we did some relays,I was in group two in my group I had Aaron,Peter,Damion,Nadia,Jayden,Nick,christian and me. unflinchingly  we lost. Then we had free time  I chose to get out and go back to class.